He's not thinking, he has no language and no understanding of the concept >He isn’t thinking about much at all, he doesn’t know language or the concept. I will pick out a few sentences/phrases which may have been written intentionally in the way that they have been but to me they feel out of place with the rest of the tone set by your writing. I'm going to stick around in this thread and critique most of what gets posted so I would really appreciate a comprehensive critique if anyone has the time.
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I feel like I am getting better with each one I complete but for some reason they always seem to end around the 2000 word mark, I can't figure out how to say more or how to convey an emotion/feeling in more than one sentence when I feel like I've already gotten the message across. I am going to post a post a pastebin of my most recent short story. His veins popped, quarks and leptons hissing and crackling with the power of a being that knows no limitations. The unfettered mind is left to cling to anything and it chose madness and fury. An understanding being with experiences in which the relate current situations to could not grasp the magnitude of such an unfettered mind’s anger. The figures taunted him for some reason or another but none in particular.
A box, plate, stick, button, tree, and leaf. Even with his lack of any experiences or stimuli the gears and cogs are moving slowly, like any machine Metal bending warming and expanding, oil slowly dripping, lubricating like molasses in a confectionery or as alcohol does with one's modesty.Ĭolors appeared then shapes then hues, from the shapes came patterns followed by figures. He can scarcely be called a human in mind or manner by our standards but, he undoubtedly is. He isn’t thinking about much at all, he doesn’t know language or the concept, he has never worn shoes or lain in bed. 256 KB, 1280x1615 A man finds himself in a room, he wasn’t here before but he is now.
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